#246564 - This was just from me scanning the thing. I'm not the be all and end all of story opinions, and stories aren't absolute, they're up to opinion, so take this whole thing with a grain of salt. Sources: 3 Cousins by Squirrelboy Best Sister in the World!!! Part 1 by LordofallSex My sis is irresistable! by HornyHornyHippo Sharing My Room With Sis by HardandSoft She is the One cited earlier Up until this point all cites were either praises or mean-spirited constructive criticism, so let's switch gears and drop a nuke - if you want to really find out how not to write a porn story, look no further than undercoverman1's I'm Hot for my Older Sister.